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Wade Terry's avatar

You are becoming a master of the cliff hanger…. Great job. What an interesting twist to speak in Wyatt’s voice and let us know his thoughts and feelings. It seems the tide has turned and he is the one feeling the insecurity having recognized what a treasure Grace is. So who will show up at the door? Sally? Grace? Both? The UPS person? Can’t wait to see.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Yowza! Such a complex story, such conflicted characters you have created here, CJ.

"He was non confrontational, preferring to leave things unresolved ....

"Too often he casually brought Sally up when the opportunity presented itself. Just to experience that thrill. Maybe it was juvenile, but ...."

"...He wasn’t interested in Sally as a girlfriend. He tried to explain that to Grace but she wouldn’t buy it..."

I hope these three people can somehow get back to square one and decide who wants what and be honest with each other. I don't know how they live like this! I am anxiously awaiting part three to find out who wins and who loses in this game.

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