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Pete Sferra's avatar

Beautifully presented in a style that makes me feel like I’m there. Your writing is so expressive, and truly engages the reader. Bravo!

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Thank you, Peter, for the kind and generous comment. So very appreciated.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

1.) Are you going to put this novel up on Substack?

2.) Are you going trick or treating on Hallowe'en this year? Costume?

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

I'm not putting the entire novel on here, though possibly another chapter or two (or sections of).

At this time I don't plan to T/T as I'll be handing out 100+ treats in my very busy neighborhood. I may wear a hobo's costume, or if I'm feeling lazy, just go as the usual: a witch (i.e., myself).

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Wade Terry's avatar

Really interesting story of family trials and angst. I loved how you wrapped up the strife between Gabby and Lily. Hoping to see how this beginning turns out in later chapters. Ps…. Your character development made the characters real, like I was seeing them rather than reading about them

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Thank you, Wade, for the observations and comments. Much appreciated.

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Rhonda's avatar

What a great story! I am always left wanting more!

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Why thank you, Rhonda. Perhaps, then, you'll buy the book! :D

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