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Kelli Palmisano's avatar

Great story. I hope Grace moved on and put that pompous @$$

in her rear view.

Can’t wait for part 2.

Love your stories! 🙌

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Thank you, Sweetie! I'm working on it. xo

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Candilaria's avatar

OMG, I need more!

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Thank you--it's coming.

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Wade Terry's avatar

Complex, perplexing, and well told story of a couple In turmoil. Interesting twists and and poignant scenes and ending. Can’t wait for the sequel.

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Awwww...thank you, Wade. I appreciate the insights.

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Rhonda's avatar

When does part 2 come out? I hate when I am left hanging which is why I don't watch soap operas. He is an idiot! She was smart to leave!

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Thank you, Rhonda. Sorry to leave you hanging!

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Alison Redford's avatar

Most excellent-thank you!

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Thank you, Alison. Most appreciated!

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T.  Otayco's avatar

There will be a sequel? I hope so! Love this. Love how she woke up, finally! This hits close to home, I think, for a lot of people.

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Thank you, Tina. Yes, I'm in the midst of drafting it. Re: "hits close to home" for many; ain't it the truth!

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Oh, dear. I'm sorry to hear that!

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

That last line is a killer. She'd moved on, and why wouldn't she? Not a moment too soon! Very funny choice of lead photo. And I loved seeing a bit of my home in the second one. Thanks for letting me see the early drafts. It turned out so well - glad you finished it! I look forward to reading the comments.

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Thank you, Sharron. And thank you so much for your insights on the earlier drafts! Hugs!

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

I'm glad you read it as a happy ending, Lu

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Pete Sferra's avatar

Very moving, your words tugged at my heart!

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Thank you, Peter. It means a lot that it touched you!

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Great!

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

I'm working on it!

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

How do you define soon?

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