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Adelina's avatar

This literally took my breath away.

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Oh, thank you, Adelina. That's kind of you to say. Followed you back and looking forward to reading your work.

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Adelina's avatar

And in the meantime, see you at LWS sessions!

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Russell Rowland's avatar

this is powerful stuff, CJ. And sad, of course.

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Thank you, Russell; this means a lot. Hugs!

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Amie McGraham's avatar

Rich with sensory detail and symbolism--well done!

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Thank you so much, Amie, for your comment. It's greatly appreciated.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Such a tragic little story. I am sorry for it. But so beautifully written, CJ. I have always found that writing it out helps me to work through the grief in my life. You might like this little example:

https://sharronbassano.substack.com/p/katy-writing-her-last-book

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Thank you, Sharron. I appreciate that you read and commented on this. And I LOVED your post. Thank you for sharing it.

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Nadine Paulsen's avatar

It is very moving. The description was beautiful and left me sad, but wanting to read more.

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palmisanocj@yahoo.com's avatar

Thank you, Nadine. I appreciate that you read and commented. AND that you support my writing addiction. HUGS!

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